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authorj-p-e-g <j-p-e-g@c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573>2008-07-05 10:32:34 +0000
committerj-p-e-g <j-p-e-g@c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573>2008-07-05 10:32:34 +0000
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Tweak some descriptions.
Also: Some of the abilities don't have any descriptions yet, so if anyone has an idea, please add some. (Even bland one-liners are better than "has no description yet" but I've run out of ideas and am not even sure what most of the remaining ones do.) git-svn-id: https://crawl-ref.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/crawl-ref/trunk@6404 c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573
-rw-r--r--crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt4
-rw-r--r--crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/skills.txt3
-rw-r--r--crawl-ref/source/religion.cc2
3 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
index 8dbed870ed..fedd1ebe41 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ Beogh is the deity worshipped by the cave orcs native to parts of the dungeon.
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Zin powers
-Zin grants followers the ability to preach to the unenlightened masses with various results. Later, followers will gain the power to help them purify and strengthen their body, and eventually they can find temporary safety in a divine refuge. Apart from that, Zin may occasionally directly intervene to save a follower's life.
+Zin grants followers the ability to preach to the unenlightened masses. Later, followers will gain the power to help them purify and strengthen their body, and eventually they can find temporary safety in a divine refuge. Apart from that, Zin may occasionally directly intervene to save a follower's life.
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The Shining One powers
@@ -122,5 +122,5 @@ Followers of Lugonu gain powers to depart the Abyss at will, to banish monsters
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Beogh powers
-Beogh encourages followers to make use of orcish gear found in the dungeon. Followers can smite their foes, and may even gain orcish followers of their own, who may be blessed by Beogh in battle, and can be recalled within a level as needed. Eventually, they'll gain the power to walk on water. Beogh will sometimes directly intervene to save a follower's life.
+Beogh encourages followers to make use of orcish gear found in the dungeon. Followers can smite their foes, and will even gain orcish followers of their own, who may be blessed by Beogh in battle and can be recalled within a level as needed. Eventually, they'll gain the power to walk on water. Beogh will sometimes directly intervene to save a follower's life.
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diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/skills.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/skills.txt
index d75263e085..17dac0d020 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/skills.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/skills.txt
@@ -103,7 +103,8 @@ faster, and vice versa.
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Armour
-Armour skill helps lessen the hinderance of heavy armour on moving,
+Armour skill increases the AC gained by wearing heavy armour, and it
+also helps lessen the hinderance of heavy armour on moving,
spellcasting and other actions.
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Dodging
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/religion.cc b/crawl-ref/source/religion.cc
index 62c5f4485e..10ae714886 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/religion.cc
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/religion.cc
@@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ std::string get_god_likes(god_type which_god, bool verbose)
break;
case GOD_ZIN:
- snprintf(info, INFO_SIZE, "sacrifice gold%s",
+ snprintf(info, INFO_SIZE, "donate money%s",
verbose ? " (by praying at an altar)" : "");
likes.push_back(info);