Improve the god power descriptions a bit.

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1 files changed, 36 insertions, 34 deletions

diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
index f936ce7062..6bf2841a17 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/gods.txt
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ gain followers of their own, for the orcs still look for their Messiah.
 Zin powers
 
 Zin grants followers the ability to preach to the unenlightened masses 
-with various results. Later, followers will gain a power to help them 
+with various results. Later, followers will gain the power to help them 
 purify and strengthen their body, and eventually they can find 
 temporary safety in a divine refuge. Apart from that, Zin may 
 occasionally directly intervene to save a follower's life.
@@ -135,82 +135,84 @@ occasionally directly intervene to save a follower's life.
 The Shining One powers
 
 Followers will gain use of a divine shield to protect them in battle.
-Later, they can hurl blasts of cleansing flame that are particularly
-effective against unholy creatures, and eventually they can ask
-the Shining One to send them help in the form of a Daeva, a powerful
-divine being. The Shining One may occasionally directly intervene to
+Later, they can hurl blasts of cleansing flame that are particularly 
+effective against unholy creatures, and, eventually, they can ask 
+the Shining One to send them help in the form of a Daeva, a powerful 
+divine being. The Shining One may occasionally directly intervene to 
 save a follower's life.
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 Kikubaaqudgha powers
 
-Kikubaaqudgha offers a power to recall your undead followers to your
-near surroundings, will protect you against side effects of necromantic
-magic, and allow you to permanently enslave undead creatures.
+Kikubaaqudgha offers the power to recall your undead followers to your 
+near surroundings, will protect you against side effects of necromantic 
+magic, and allow you to permanently enslave undead creatures. 
 Eventually, you can summon an emissary of death to fight with you.
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 Yredelemnul powers
 
-Yredelemnul gives you powers to raise corpses to fight on your side, to
-recall your undead followers to your vicinity, and to drain the life
-force of living creatures. Eventually, you'll gain a power to sway
+Yredelemnul gives you the power to raise corpses to fight on your side, 
+to recall your undead followers to your vicinity, and to drain the life 
+force of living creatures. Eventually, you'll gain the power to sway 
 hostile undeads' loyalties and make them fight for you instead. 
-Sometimes, Yredelemnul may directly intervene to save a follower's life.
+Yredelemnul will also sporadically gift you with stronger undead 
+servants. Sometimes, Yredelemnul may directly intervene to save a 
+follower's life.
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 # no active powers of Vehumet
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 Okawaru powers
 
 Followers will soon gain the ability to temporarily increase their 
-strength, and, much later, to haste themselves. Okawaru will eventually
+strength, and, much later, to haste themselves. Okawaru will eventually 
 gift followers with weapons and armour.
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 Makhleb powers
 
-Makhleb offers followers various means to inflict immense damage and to
+Makhleb offers followers various means to inflict immense damage, and to 
 call in help from powerful demons.
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 Sif Muna powers
 
 Followers of Sif Muna can channel magical energy when they need it the 
-most and they gain a power to forget any spell at will, so as to learn
-new ones. Sif Muna protects spellcasters against the negative effects
+most, and they gain a power to forget any spell at will, so as to learn 
+new ones. Sif Muna protects spellcasters against the negative effects 
 of miscasting a spell. Over time, followers will receive any spellbook 
 to be found in the realm.
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 Trog powers
 
-Trog offers various powers to help you in battle, namely the ability to
-go berserk at will and the ability to make wounds heal more quickly. 
+Trog offers various powers to help you in battle, namely the ability to 
+go berserk at will, and the ability to make wounds heal more quickly. 
 Later, followers may call in powerful raging allies. Eventually, Trog 
 will gift followers with weapons focused on damage.
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 Nemelex Xobeh powers
 
-Followers of Nemelex Xobeh gain various ways to influence fate when
+Followers of Nemelex Xobeh gain various ways to influence fate when 
 playing cards.
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 Elyvilon powers
 
-The healer god offers followers various means to heal themselves and
-others, including ones to rid their body from effects surpassing those
-of simple damage. Elyvilon will occasionally directly intervene to
+The healer god offers followers various means to heal themselves and 
+others, including ones to rid their body from effects surpassing those 
+of simple damage. Elyvilon will occasionally directly intervene to 
 save a follower's life, and is almost certain to do so during prayer.
 %%%%
 Lugonu powers
 
-Followers of Lugonu gain powers to depart the Abyss at will, to banish
-monsters there, and eventually to gate themselves into this realm of
-chaos - at the cost of a part of their soul.
-Apart from that, they may cause great damage to monsters, and gain an
-ability to corrupt the ordered world, enabling them to open a gate for
-creatures of the Abyss to pass through.
+Followers of Lugonu gain powers to depart the Abyss at will, to banish 
+monsters there, and eventually to gate themselves into this realm of 
+chaos - at the cost of a part of their soul. Apart from that, they may 
+cause great damage to monsters, and gain an ability to corrupt the 
+ordered world, enabling them to open a gate for creatures of the Abyss 
+to pass through.
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 Beogh powers
 
-Beogh encourages followers to make use of orcish gear to be found in
-the dungeon. Followers can smite their foes and may even gain orcish 
-followers of their own who may be blessed by Beogh in battle, and can 
-be recalled within a level as needed. Eventually, they'll gain the 
-power to walk on water.
-Beogh will sometimes directly intervene to save a follower's life.
+Beogh encourages followers to make use of orcish gear found in the 
+dungeon. Followers can smite their foes, and may even gain orcish 
+followers of their own, who may be blessed by Beogh in battle, and can 
+be recalled within a level as needed. Eventually, they'll gain the power 
+to walk on water. Beogh will sometimes directly intervene to save a 
+follower's life.
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