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Diffstat (limited to 'crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc')
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1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc index aa842b9e79..9c38a90109 100644 --- a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc +++ b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc @@ -226,8 +226,8 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width) text += info; text += "safely through the depths of the dungeon, retrieving the fabled orb of Zot and " "returning it to the surface. In the beginning, however, let discovery be your " - "main goal: try to delve as deeply as possible but beware as death lurks around " - "every corner here." EOL EOL; + "main goal. Try to delve as deeply as possible but beware; death lurks around " + "every corner." EOL EOL; linebreak_string2(text, width); result += formatted_string::parse_string(text); @@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width) result += " <white>S</white> - saves the game, to be resumed later (but note that death is permanent)" EOL; result += " <white>x</white> - examine something in your vicinity" EOL EOL; - text = "This tutorial will help you playing Crawl without reading any documentation. " + text = "This tutorial will help you play Crawl without reading any documentation. " "If you feel intrigued, there is more information available in these files " "(all of which can also be read in-game):" EOL; linebreak_string2(text, width); @@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen() Options.tutorial_left = 0; std::string text; - mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature perishing is a sad, but " + mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature death is a sad, but " "common occurence in Crawl. Rest assured that with diligence and " "playing experience your characters will last longer.\n", MSGCH_TUTORIAL); mpr( "Perhaps the following advice can improve your playing style:", MSGCH_TUTORIAL); @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen() "potion of speed can really save your bacon."; break; case 5: - text = "Never fight more than one monster if you can help it. Always " + text = "Never fight more than one monster, if you can help it. Always " "back into a corridor so that they are forced to fight you one " "on one."; break; @@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@ void learned_something_new(unsigned int seen_what, int x, int y) break; case TUT_SEEN_TRAPS: - text = "Oops... you just entered a trap. An unwary adventurer will " + text = "Oops... you just triggered a trap. An unwary adventurer will " "occasionally stumble into one of these nasty constructions " "depicted by <w>^<magenta>. They can do physical damage (with " "darts or needles, for example) or have other, more magical " @@ -1101,17 +1101,17 @@ void learned_something_new(unsigned int seen_what, int x, int y) break; case TUT_YOU_ENCHANTED: text = "Enchantments of all types can befall you temporarily. " - "Abbreviated signalisation appears at the lower end of the stats " + "Brief descriptions of these appear at the lower end of the stats " "area. Press <w>@<magenta> for more details. A list of all " - "possible enchantments is given in the manual."; + "possible enchantments is in the manual."; break; case TUT_YOU_SICK: learned_something_new(TUT_YOU_ENCHANTED); - text = "Corpses can be spoiled or inedible, resulting in sickness. " + text = "Corpses can be spoiled or inedible, making you sick. " "Also, some monsters' flesh is less palatable than others'. " - "During sickness your hitpoints won't regenerate and sometimes " + "While sick, your hitpoints won't regenerate and sometimes " "an attribute may decrease. It wears off with time (wait with " - "<w>5<magenta>) or you could quaff a potion of healing."; + "<w>5<magenta>) or you can quaff a potion of healing."; break; case TUT_YOU_POISON: learned_something_new(TUT_YOU_ENCHANTED); |