From eab440c1096188fc5a93de947d7f835979dac23f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nicholas Feinberg Date: Sun, 10 Aug 2014 20:51:31 -0700 Subject: Tweak Terence's description Not ideal, but a little less of a run-on sentence. --- crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt index 5d6069ab96..e3b5e776c3 100644 --- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt +++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt @@ -437,9 +437,8 @@ daring leaps! But watch out for her knives! Terence A violent murderer who kills for both pleasure and profit, Terence has been -forced into hiding after a botched job, and can't really afford to risk letting -anyone who has seen him leave the dungeon alive — there is a price on his head, -after all. +forced into hiding after a botched job. There's a price on his head, and he +can't afford to leave anyone who sees him alive! %%%% Tiamat -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf