From 515c377adb6a70b4af7002a1a9a01f6093e90705 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: peterb12 Date: Sat, 31 Mar 2007 16:51:22 +0000 Subject: Minor copyedits git-svn-id: https://crawl-ref.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/crawl-ref/trunk@1147 c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573 --- crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc') diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc index aa842b9e79..e9c676483e 100644 --- a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc +++ b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc @@ -226,8 +226,8 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width) text += info; text += "safely through the depths of the dungeon, retrieving the fabled orb of Zot and " "returning it to the surface. In the beginning, however, let discovery be your " - "main goal: try to delve as deeply as possible but beware as death lurks around " - "every corner here." EOL EOL; + "main goal. Try to delve as deeply as possible but beware; death lurks around " + "every corner." EOL EOL; linebreak_string2(text, width); result += formatted_string::parse_string(text); @@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width) result += " S - saves the game, to be resumed later (but note that death is permanent)" EOL; result += " x - examine something in your vicinity" EOL EOL; - text = "This tutorial will help you playing Crawl without reading any documentation. " + text = "This tutorial will help you play Crawl without reading any documentation. " "If you feel intrigued, there is more information available in these files " "(all of which can also be read in-game):" EOL; linebreak_string2(text, width); @@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen() Options.tutorial_left = 0; std::string text; - mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature perishing is a sad, but " + mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature death is a sad, but " "common occurence in Crawl. Rest assured that with diligence and " "playing experience your characters will last longer.\n", MSGCH_TUTORIAL); mpr( "Perhaps the following advice can improve your playing style:", MSGCH_TUTORIAL); @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen() "potion of speed can really save your bacon."; break; case 5: - text = "Never fight more than one monster if you can help it. Always " + text = "Never fight more than one monster, if you can help it. Always " "back into a corridor so that they are forced to fight you one " "on one."; break; @@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@ void learned_something_new(unsigned int seen_what, int x, int y) break; case TUT_SEEN_TRAPS: - text = "Oops... you just entered a trap. An unwary adventurer will " + text = "Oops... you just triggered a trap. An unwary adventurer will " "occasionally stumble into one of these nasty constructions " "depicted by ^. They can do physical damage (with " "darts or needles, for example) or have other, more magical " -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf