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| author | dolorous <dolorous@c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573> | 2009-02-07 05:35:41 +0000 |
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| committer | dolorous <dolorous@c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573> | 2009-02-07 05:35:41 +0000 |
| commit | 80219219bee1231f7833c47a394c8f5c3b04d283 (patch) | |
| tree | 58619743cf60e4a426cf44dd35ad1337b4b54f78 /crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/branches.txt | |
| parent | 324e57233fc4e5de5c43bdde2d7ee130b7f714e3 (diff) | |
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Add wording and typo fixes.
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diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/branches.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/branches.txt index bd3fb66921..89653bc0d2 100644 --- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/branches.txt +++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/branches.txt @@ -110,8 +110,8 @@ either on Crypt:2 or Crypt:3. %%%% Hell -The hallway to the four hells is guarded by Geryon. Heros who prove their -worth in the vestibule and blow Geryon's horn, may explore the different +The hallway to the four hells is guarded by Geryon. Heroes who prove their +worth in the vestibule and blow Geryon's horn may explore the different regions of Hell: Dis, Gehenna, Cocytus and Tartarus. Portals to the Vestibule of Hell are found abundantly in the deeper parts @@ -151,15 +151,15 @@ Pan Pandemonium, colloquially known as Pan, is an infinite realm of pain and suffering. Pan contains four special runes, as well as generic ones, in -addition to lots of loot. All these treasures are guarded by demons and -cruel Pan lords. Many a hero, confusing confidence with megalomania, died -unsuspectingly in the barrage of torment and hellfire. +addition to lots of loot. All these treasures are guarded by demons and +cruel Pan lords. Many a hero, confusing confidence with megalomania, has +died unsuspectingly in the barrage of torment and hellfire. %%%% Abyss -The Abyss is a truly bizarre place, everchanging and twisted. It is filled -by all sorts of monsters, mostly of demonic nature, whose common aim is to -feast on intruders. It is also the garbage dump for many sorcerors, who +The Abyss is a truly bizarre place, everchanging and twisted. It is filled +with all sorts of monsters, mostly of demonic nature, whose common aim is +to feast on intruders. It is also the garbage dump for many sorcerers, who delight in sending would-be champions like you to these proving grounds of madness. Reportedly, there is some structure to the chaos, as Lugonu seems to concoct schemes around this place and its denizens. |