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authordolorous <dolorous@c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573>2008-06-30 05:45:55 +0000
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Priests:
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-Priests serve either Zin, the ancient and revered God of Law, or the
-rather less pleasant Death-God Yredelemnul. Hill Orcs may choose to
-follow the Orc god Beogh instead. Priests enter the dungeon with a
+Priests serve either Zin, the ancient and revered God of Law, or
+Yredelemnul, the rather less pleasant God of Death. Hill Orcs may choose
+to follow the Orc god Beogh instead. Priests enter the dungeon with a
traditional weapon, a priestly robe, and a few healing potions.
Chaos Knights:
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The Chaos Knight is a fighter who chooses to serve one of the Gods of
Chaos. There are two choices: Xom or Makhleb. Xom is a very
-unpredictable (and possibly psychotic) entity who rewards or punishes
-according to whim. Makhleb the Destroyer is a more purposeful God, who
-appreciates destruction and offers a variety of very violent powers to
+unpredictable (and possibly psychotic) entity who rewards or punishes
+according to whim. Makhleb the Destroyer is a more purposeful God, who
+appreciates destruction and offers a variety of very violent powers to
the faithful.
Death Knights:
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-The Death Knight is a fighter who aligns him or herself with the powers
+The Death Knight is a fighter who aligns him or herself with the powers
of death. There are two types of Death Knights: those who worship and
-draw their abilities from the Demon-God Yredelemnul, and those who study
+draw their abilities from the Death-God Yredelemnul, and those who study
the fearsome arts of necromancy.
Healers: