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| author | Nicholas Feinberg <pleasingfung@gmail.com> | 2014-08-10 20:51:31 -0700 |
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| committer | Nicholas Feinberg <pleasingfung@gmail.com> | 2014-08-10 20:51:54 -0700 |
| commit | eab440c1096188fc5a93de947d7f835979dac23f (patch) | |
| tree | 7cd245eb8c824a6d8ee94a7867d5f6a12e98b91c | |
| parent | 3a4a750dde8e1b6ca3a8d030d5ac3cd90ac8d6e7 (diff) | |
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Tweak Terence's description
Not ideal, but a little less of a run-on sentence.
| -rw-r--r-- | crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt | 5 |
1 files changed, 2 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt index 5d6069ab96..e3b5e776c3 100644 --- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt +++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt @@ -437,9 +437,8 @@ daring leaps! But watch out for her knives! Terence A violent murderer who kills for both pleasure and profit, Terence has been -forced into hiding after a botched job, and can't really afford to risk letting -anyone who has seen him leave the dungeon alive — there is a price on his head, -after all. +forced into hiding after a botched job. There's a price on his head, and he +can't afford to leave anyone who sees him alive! %%%% Tiamat |