Minor copyedits

git-svn-id: https://crawl-ref.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/crawl-ref/trunk@1147 c06c8d41-db1a-0410-9941-cceddc491573

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc
index aa842b9e79..e9c676483e 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/tutorial.cc
@@ -226,8 +226,8 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width)
     text += info;
     text += "safely through the depths of the dungeon, retrieving the fabled orb of Zot and "
             "returning it to the surface. In the beginning, however, let discovery be your "
-            "main goal: try to delve as deeply as possible but beware as death lurks around "
-            "every corner here." EOL EOL;
+            "main goal. Try to delve as deeply as possible but beware; death lurks around "
+            "every corner." EOL EOL;
     linebreak_string2(text, width);
     result += formatted_string::parse_string(text);
                 
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ static formatted_string tut_starting_info(unsigned int width)
     result += "  <white>S</white> - saves the game, to be resumed later (but note that death is permanent)" EOL;
     result += "  <white>x</white> - examine something in your vicinity" EOL EOL;
 
-    text = "This tutorial will help you playing Crawl without reading any documentation. "
+    text = "This tutorial will help you play Crawl without reading any documentation. "
            "If you feel intrigued, there is more information available in these files "
            "(all of which can also be read in-game):" EOL;
     linebreak_string2(text, width);
@@ -539,7 +539,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen()
     Options.tutorial_left = 0;
     std::string text;
 
-    mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature perishing is a sad, but "
+    mpr( "Condolences! Your character's premature death is a sad, but "
          "common occurence in Crawl. Rest assured that with diligence and "
          "playing experience your characters will last longer.\n", MSGCH_TUTORIAL);
     mpr( "Perhaps the following advice can improve your playing style:", MSGCH_TUTORIAL);
@@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ void tutorial_death_screen()
                     "potion of speed can really save your bacon.";
             break;
         case 5:
-            text =  "Never fight more than one monster if you can help it. Always "
+            text =  "Never fight more than one monster, if you can help it. Always "
                     "back into a corridor so that they are forced to fight you one "
                     "on one.";
             break;
@@ -1028,7 +1028,7 @@ void learned_something_new(unsigned int seen_what, int x, int y)
 
           break;
       case TUT_SEEN_TRAPS:
-          text =  "Oops... you just entered a trap. An unwary adventurer will "
+          text =  "Oops... you just triggered a trap. An unwary adventurer will "
                   "occasionally stumble into one of these nasty constructions "
                   "depicted by <w>^<magenta>. They can do physical damage (with "
                   "darts or needles, for example) or have other, more magical "